Replies to Ann

From How:
Nice story. A refeshing change from the usual type of BDSM story.

From Rich:
I've been trying, believe me. But all of my efforts come up pale next to the original. Responding to the story is not hard, but doing so in a way that does justice to the lyrical quality of the original is well nigh impossible!

If you want response stories, maybe you should start with less highly-polished pieces. Excellent stuff is tough to follow.